April Pickle replied to Bill Delvaux's topic in Writing Prompt for 1/20 - 1/31: A Disorienting StartThanks for this, @Bill Delvaux. Good read. I like the way you showed how those thoughts bounced around in an anxious soul. I’d like the ending better if it stopped at “that flight to Boston.” I think your reader can get to that last part all on her own.
April Pickle replied to Aimee Guest's topic in Writing Prompt for 1/20 - 1/31: A Disorienting StartWell done, @Aimee Guest. Thank you for showing us what you were seeing and feeling, and for doing it with such grace and courage. I think this is a story about letting go.